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My original thesis: Doulas and midwives are essential and needed in
prenatal care, insurances should provide coverage for their services;
they provide emotional, physical, and one on one support.
Professor edit: Doulas and midwives are essential to prenatal care
and insurance should provide coverage for their services; they
provide emotional, physical, and one-on-one support.
Professor Feedback
– Essential/needed is repetitive.
I’ve adjusted the first part of the sentence above to show that your
debatable claim is not just that they are essential but that they are
so essential that their services be covered by insurance. You could
still edit the sentence so it’s simpler and more direct.
As it is presently structured introduction body paragraph and
conclusion, your three-part roadmap suggests you will structure your unit report to explain in Body Paragraph 1 how doulas provide emotional support, in Body Paragraph 2 how they provide physical support, and in Body Paragraph 3, they describe how they provide one-on-one support.
It will be important to clarify how “one-on-one support”
differs from emotional and/or physical support. Remember you do
want to reference multiple sources, ideally at least one per
paragraph.
You can do secondary source research on your own, but
of course, if you can cite more than one of the sources from Unit 1,
that is preferable.
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